The Incorruptible — Act III
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Act III
Summary: As Vesper becomes an obstacle to Merritt’s congregation’s growth, Merritt, Thomas, and the Beggar plot Vesper’s death. Merritt attempts to avoid the Spirit’s prophecy concerning the staff.
Scene i Outside Merritt’s Temple. Enter Merritt, Thomas, and Beggar. THOMAS: His men waylay our congregants like robbers travelers at night. Our advocate persuaded him to see us not as partners but as ravishers of his sole daughter. The more Justina lets us dote on her, the louder Vesper shouts his prayers outside these walls while you are prophesying. We dismiss our flock and they are catechized as they walk home. And some return in Vesper’s robes and speak of God as Vesper does, except these ones are more compelling since their old habits are known to the whole town who marvel at such stark reform. BEGGAR: That dirty band of sorcerers deserves the stake, and he’ll burn first! MERRITT: Despite the time his daughter’s spent with us, suffering no abuse, he does not rest in his complaint. He says we have no virtue, well to hell with patience then. Since birds with louder songs make plainer marks, our eager bolt will pierce his chest. THOMAS: You have a plan? MERRITT: Since New Year’s Day. I’d hoped it wouldn’t come to this, but I could leave nothing to chance. THOMAS: There’s Vesper now. MERRITT: [aside to Beggar] Go rouse your rabble. Exeunt Beggar. Enter Vesper and his acolytes. MERRITT: You’re early. Don’t your converts know our temple’s doors are shut till six? All the adherents you would poach will be delayed another hour. THOMAS: Just as the hunter lies in wait before its game comes out to graze, so Vesper preps apologies to make his dogmas strike our hearts. MERRITT: Well said! And well perceived, my son. VESPER: You would believe I’ve come to kill since all you’ve ever known is death. MERRITT: We are the dead? Who here exults in life? If it’s not us, would you, you mortifiers of the flesh, lay claim to that activity? We only chance to speak of death to prove that we must live life now before that most assured end. VESPER: Yes, how could I forget that you were gifted with prognostication? How wise that you, like Solomon, have seen that war and famine come in turns, grasses wilt atop the graves of men whose fortunes failed to save their flesh from its decay, and every breath inhaled is lost. But what you call the end is not. [Enter Beggar with mob.] And you can’t point the way beyond death’s tiny chasm, cannot teach a man to cross that crack and live. THOMAS: Hundreds of men we’ve taught to live. VESPER: A shallow life. When that dries up, they’ll need to draw from deeper wells. Look at these men. [Vesper motions to his newer acolytes] How many were once thirsting and unsatisfied in Merritt’s temple? Ask yourselves: With what has Merritt slaked your thirst? BEGGAR: The spirit’s word, you damp raccoon. [aside to mob] He’ll try to get you turned around with clever talk. But with bare hands! He has no spirit-given staff. MERRITT: Vesper, your daughter trusts in us. Do you believe Justina’s grasp on truth’s so frail that we could dupe her if our story wasn’t true? VESPER: She will eventually discern how her good nature could persuade her that there’s grace where grace is not. If you had let us baptize you as John baptized the Christ, you’d know, because I would have taught you, that whatever spirit fills a man will be revealed. His face will be a living icon of his master. Whoever climbs the mountain will descend beatified, his form transfigured and most glorious, but to the devil’s flock a terror. In your face, Merritt, nothing hides. I see already what I know Justina will. How great your fall is bound to be, O Lucifer. For you and all your host of demons! BEGGAR: [to the mob] Those words just sealed his fate! Kill him! The Beggar’s mob charges Vesper. The acolytes flee, but Vesper waits, and the mob’s blows knock him to the ground. Enter Justina. JUSTINA: What’s happening? Oh, help! This mob is killing one of God’s beloved. MERRITT: [to Thomas] This advent is unfortunate. JUSTINA: This creature can’t deserve to die. The merciful are blessed with mercy, and debt released is credit gained in heaven. Stop! Don’t do this thing. MERRITT: [to Thomas] Run down and make that mob disperse. Be sure she doesn’t see our beggar. THOMAS: You rogues will feel the prophet’s wrath if you won’t heed Justina’s plea! Thomas chases the Beggar’s mob offstage. Exeunt Thomas. JUSTINA: Those robes… Is that? It is! Oh God! [Justina cradles Vesper’s head in her lap. Vesper moans.] Don’t move. Just rest and I will pray. MERRITT: [aside] Perhaps I can still pull this off. [aloud] Justina? Did I hear your voice? JUSTINA: Oh, Merritt, come and help me. Quick! MERRITT: Is he alive? JUSTINA: [Justina nods] Just barely though. MERRITT: We don’t have time to wait for Tom. Move to his legs, I’ll grab his head, and we can lay him on the altar inside the temple. He can rest while you run for the doctor. Whoa! At Merritt’s touch, the Vesper leaps up on all fours and snaps his teeth at Merritt’s hand. He circles Merritt like a wild animal. JUSTINA: God granted him recovery! MERRITT: Is this a miracle or curse? Nebuchadnezzar’s sanity was more assured than Vesper’s is. Why does he shy and growl at us? JUSTINA: Come to me, father. Peace. I’m here. It’s me, your daughter, come to care for you. Don’t back away. Don’t run. MERRITT: It seems that mob has beat the man from him and left us with a beast. JUSTINA: Don’t say that, Merritt. I believe he will be well. He’s in there still. If I could just reach out and— [The Vesper howls and flees.] He didn’t recognize my voice. He’s just confused. He’s just—Oh, oh. [Justina falls to her knees sobbing.] Where will he go? MERRITT: We’ll find him. I won’t rest until he’s taken care of. JUSTINA: You’d give up sleep to buy my peace? MERRITT: Your peace? Oh, yes. [Merritt kneels beside Justina.] I cannot brook your sorrow any more than Zeus could look upon the golden-haired Demeter without being moved. Your tears to me are like the death of summer or an early frost whose silent blade excises leaf from branch while yet that first is green. A plague upon the prophet who could see your misery and not work ceaselessly to see you soothed. JUSTINA: That shows how badly he misjudged you, Merritt. He believed you’d serve only yourself. I saw a hint but also underestimated your love. I know it fully now. MERRITT: You only think you know its fullness. But I will show how far its border lies and how my love resists both boundary and constraint. Merritt and Justina embrace. Enter Thomas. Thomas hides. JUSTINA: If that is true, don’t hesitate. For I would learn all of your love and see it met commensurate even if that should leave me bare. MERRITT: I’d have you at your barest still. Love feels the body burned, and yet there’s nothing love from love withholds. Merritt raises Justina from the ground. Exeunt Merritt and Justina. THOMAS: Till now, Justina kept aloft my heart and his, preferred not one over the other, teasing both, persuading both there was a chance her favor might belong to him. But here, I’m dropped. Here, scattered like a thousand shards obsidian, a hopeful mirror turned unhoned blade. In what direction will it point? Let’s sharpen it, see how it’s made. Exeunt. Scene ii Merritt’s Parlor. Enter Justina and Merritt. MERRITT: The townsmen all are terrified, and they complain about the sleep they lose as Vesper howls each night and races through the streets and huffs at their backdoors, looking for scraps. But what am I supposed to do? The Vesper flees from everyone except his acolytes, and they’re content to let him live among the beasts. They feed him from their hands, and with them he seems all but tame. JUSTINA: For many years, his disciplines meant living in the wilderness denying his humanity, suffering deprivations most of us could never bear. The wolf is ravenous because he hunts and only earns an empty gut. But carnal things will never sate my father’s appetite. He bows before the cross, for he respects the symbol of Christ’s suffering and those as well who sacrifice their comfort, taking priestly vows. MERRITT: Thomas supposes if we had some Vesper robes, your father might approach us. JUSTINA: But why would you feint with unearned raiment, which I doubt would fool my father, when you have the spirit’s token of your power? MERRITT: Which he refused to give its due for many months. Why would he now? JUSTINA: The Vesper’s intellect refused, but God has freed him from his mind’s intractability and blessed him with the instinct of a beast which always does the Godhead’s will. MERRITT: I’m not so confident as you. JUSTINA: Did Aaron’s rod not swallow up the vipers pharaoh’s court magicians conjured, and did its almond bud not prove his right to serve the Lord? Give me your staff, and I will show the merits of its form. It’s brazen as Nehushtan was to demonstrate your power to spare your flock from death. The top’s a crooked basilisk turned inwardly, thus petrified as every man becomes who fails to set his eyes on God and serves the cockatrice that is himself. Its eyes are neither opaline, lapis, or garnet, nor are matched but are composed of pearls opposed in color—on the left is black, the right is white—just as the hands of God on judgment day will seem opposed in purpose as they stoke the fires that melt away the dross of those who long for purity but harden flaws into the clay that would not yield beneath his touch. If any doubts the spirit’s role, these pearls will be the wounds of Christ. Beholding them, she must regret her hesitance and, touching them, compound her sorrow. To postpone accepting truth so obvious, requires a self-inflicted blindness. My father has been freed from that. Enter Thomas. THOMAS: Justina. My apologies. I should have guessed that you’d be here. JUSTINA: Oh, Thomas! Good. You must convince your father of his authority. He doubts his crozier’s power can tame my father in his wild state. THOMAS: I will not interfere or be a go-between in lover’s feuds. My father knows his mind, and not a drop of blood can turn aside his purposes. I’ll leave you two. JUSTINA: No, stay. I was about to leave, and he abhors to be alone. I will return within the hour. Exeunt Justina. MERRITT: The truth is she can’t bear to part with me for long. THOMAS: Why must you keep her now? Her father is beyond reasoning with. Justina’s voice means nothing to the Vesper but stretches me out on tenterhooks while your romancing leaves me dry and apt to rip when you caress and kiss the girl. It makes me sick. When will you break this pointless tryst? MERRITT: It’s not so simple, Tom. I’ve stolen the love of naïve girls before. But hers, beyond all innocence, has pardoned me, the former thief, by freely giving me much more than what the past has seen me scrape off with. My treachery is overdue and yet, leaving her, I’d betray myself, accepting poverty instead of riches. You admit the foreignness such abstinence would seem observed by one like me. THOMAS: I should have let the beggar kill the man instead of murdering my chances with Justina. Clever, siccing me on your mob, so you could have your unimpeded way with her while she was mourning. MERRITT: Tom, I say this with affection—you have many useful qualities, but you are no impediment between a woman and a man. You’re right about that first bit though. Vesper’s insanity is worse for us than all his holiness. The layman’s superstitious mind, which venerates this staff as sign from God, lends Vesper’s wails a weight to match. Some doubt he was concussed that night, suspect an ominous intention in his keening call. It takes a wolf to know a wolf, they say and look askance at our fine wools which made our winter warm. If he had died, we could have had the beggar hanged, and he’d have been the last of our assembly lost to Vesper. Which would you prefer, a hunting beast or haunting ghost? A door slams offstage. The sound of a struggle. THOMAS: Are you expecting company? Enter Beggar with a woman. BEGGAR: She burst in through the servant’s door. I could not stop her. WOMAN: Snowfall’s bound to make impassable the trail my husband took to cross the mountain. Let’s hideaway and warm ourselves until the thaw when he’ll return. MERRITT: Why make me to repeat myself? You have no business here; get lost! WOMAN: Abusing me in public, I’ll forgive if privately you’ll love me once again. I’ve longed for you. This beggar and your son won’t tell. There is no harm lying in bed. MERRITT: For God’s sake, woman, leave and lock the door behind you. Our days are done. [to beggar] I’m begging you, throw her outside. Exeunt Beggar and the woman, protesting. THOMAS: You’re turning down a willing lay? Justina has bewitched you, not the other way around. MERRITT: Bewitched is too disparaging for one as fair as our Justine. Enchanted. THOMAS: Semantic arguments are not my main concern. A spell’s a spell, and you are not the virile man that rod deserves as handler. Drop her before she ruins you. MERRITT: Don’t throw a tantrum, son. I know these roads much better than you think. The ravings of a jealous rival won’t make me give Justina up. THOMAS: You’d choose her over your own son? MERRITT: I choose to live forgetting you insist upon dichotomies so false the cutter ends up cut. My door opens for both of you. Being unable to bear her here, it’s you that would choose loneliness. THOMAS: If you are going to force my hand, I’ll do my best to soldier on. But if I leave, I won’t be back until you’ve gotten rid of her. Enter Justina carrying a package. THOMAS: Our dear enchantress has returned. JUSTINA: That’s nearing on a kind remark, though I suspect you talk in code since nothing kind has left your mouth in recent weeks. No, don’t explain. Just know, things can’t go on like this, and I sincerely hope that you and I will reconcile soon. MERRITT: I hope so, too. But what is that you’re carrying, Justine? JUSTINA: A gift. The first of many vestments you shall wear as suits the calendar. And Tom, when time allows, I’ll make a set for you to signify your role assisting at the altar. THOMAS: We’ve always worn less-formal clothes since vestments do not fit the age and are as welcomed on a man as ballgowns. Dresses on a priest do not command respect. The staff the spirit gave makes people bow. JUSTINA: You seek a negative intent in everything. Why would I want emasculated men around? You see how well I know your tastes. The argent thread with which I stitched the subtle scrollwork round the crosses. The darkest silver fox-fur trim. The sense of stark regality. [Justina drapes the vestment over Merritt’s shoulders.] This is the mantle of a king, and Merritt wears it handsomely. THOMAS: [aside] She presses close to him to prove the point I’ve known since Vesper’s brush with death: She’ll never be with me. I can’t look on when she’s with him. Exeunt Thomas. MERRITT: Your talents never end, my girl. You’ve lain on me the yoke of glory, a cloak with heft so marvelous the eye can see it at a glance. JUSTINA: With such a cloak Elijah struck the waters, parted them, and crossed to meet the warhorses of heaven. His righteousness was judged too great to bury. May yours be judged so, too. MERRITT: Amen. I wish that all could see me through your eyes, Justina, but I’d always have your eyes see more. Let’s lay this cloak before the fire that it may bless this night and be the seat upon which you and I shall overcome and rule together. JUSTINA: Would that be wise? Suppose a spark ignites this robe while we are deep in conversation and then all its power is lost. MERRITT: It won’t be so. I’ll show you how the flames reveal their subtle bodies in the dark and how to firewalk those coals and leave unsinged your flawless soles. Exeunt. Scene iii The town plaza. Enter a group of townsmen with ROSH. Thomas enters opposite. TOWNSMAN: The Vesper held six dozen men at bay. Despite the clubs they drubbed him with, he didn’t lift a hand against them. Rigor mortis clutched eight men while they were yet alive, a falling branch struck three more dead when they took off, and not a one lived forty days beyond that night. The last said with his dying breath that he’d been paid to mug the monk. ROSH: By who? TOWNSMAN: Death took him fore he said. But think of it. Who profits but the so-called prophet and his son? THOMAS: What rubbish are you peddling, Rosh? Six dozen men? Who dug their graves if they’re all dead? In fact, I chased them off the Vesper, back to Court and Rowe, and each retained their ghost. Don’t make a tragedy a myth. He’s just a man turned idiot. ROSH: Six dozen men or six, they thrashed the Vesper hard enough he has no right to live but he’s on lease from God above. Deny me that. THOMAS: You make it sound as though the sky had opened up, and angels shuttled Vesper’s soul to Peter’s gate but left his body with its breath behind to torment all of us. If God has spared the Vesper’s life, why make him roam the streets deranged? That he survived’s an accident. ROSH: The prophet’s stooge won’t change my mind. If he’s alive, it is no thanks to you, and if I had to guess, I’d bet you two been whetting knives for your next chance at Vesper’s life. But you can’t kill him, less you aim to clamber through the spirit’s hedge. The man’s immortal now, and that, Merritt has not the power to change. Exeunt Rosh and townsmen. THOMAS: You’d have to be a perfect fool to think a man invincible. Exeunt. Scene iv Merritt’s bedroom. Enter Merritt with his crozier. He paces the room. MERRITT: For all the sway this crozier’s blessed me with, I can’t command my son’s divided loyalty unless I first deprive myself and throw Justina out. But out to where? Does Vesper have a hole where she can lay her head? How could I rest knowing her hair was lichen-strewn, the lunules of her fingernails eclipsed by dirt and bruised to bone, her dreams disturbed by Vesper’s wails while I sit in my luxury and eat my fill in chambers warmed with aromatic evergreen? The Vesper’s daughter has disarmed me thoroughly with kindnesses mistaken younger men might think a wife would naturally confer. But Joan was loathe that I caress her, never boiled us tea to drink, nor piled my shoulders high with fur when winter chilled our single-pen. Justina slices apples thin for cider when the evening’s cold, takes pains to keep my tumbler filled, and is not stingy with her lips. When I pretend to leave, she traps me on the couch, willingly pinned beneath her legs. She won’t consent to part with me unless the length is less than half a day. The strength of Vesper’s daughter’s constancy! If Tom had not deserted me, my son and I’d parley, despite the envy in his heart, and rate the mystery of Justina’s love against the spirit’s promised grave for such a loyalty as she displays. Could her death come from me? I need another set of ears advising me. Beggar, come here! [Enter Beggar.] When did you last see Tom around? BEGGAR: Just yesterday. He rents a room off of the square and spends his time wandering between the woods and town. MERRITT: Did he say when he would return. BEGGAR: He did and didn’t, sir. MERRITT: Don’t be so damn opaque. Just tell me straight. BEGGAR: He won’t return until the Vesper issue has been resolved. MERRITT: The girl? BEGGAR: I could’ve missed the meaning, sir, but that was how I took his words. MERRITT: If it were any other girl I’d blame him, but then here we are. Completely hypothetically, were our two roles reversed, I sense that I might pout about it, too. BEGGAR: She is a rare one to be sure. MERRITT: And how would you describe the girl’s affection toward me? Does she have an undeniable desire to please me, Beggar? BEGGAR: Who am I to judge a woman’s way with you? You know Justina best. She has no secrets, hides no motives, and forecasts her tempers plainly as a thundercloud. With Thomas gone, she is your closest confidante. If you can’t judge her, then who can? MERRITT: But you would say she’s loyal? BEGGAR: Yes. MERRITT: More so, perhaps, than anyone. The Beggar nods. BEGGAR: Would you say I’m a runner-up? MERRITT: No prophet worth his salt conflates the zeal of men in desperate straits with loyalty. It’d only take a fresh, young face who promised fish for you to bait a hook with my intestines. Go on, Beggar. Pray that I have mercy on your frailty. [Exeunt Beggar. Merritt contemplates his staff.] I’d rather throw this staff away then see this cockatrice’s spines stained with Justina’s blood. But words of prophecy are not undone so easily. Without this staff, this kingdom I have built will fall, and it would find my hand again, disguised in form, to strike her dead. No, I must find a way to break her loyalty and drive her off. Yes. Let the prophet prophesy: So long as I still grip this staff, Justina will be spared her life. Exeunt. Scene v Near the woods. Late in the day. Enter Thomas, wandering about. THOMAS: She knew the depth of what I felt. Except my foolish New Year’s stunt, I told her just the way it was. The sea and all as emptiness without her, and that’s what she chose! I could have taken nothingness if she had done the decent thing and disappeared, gone with a lover whose form was unfamiliar so that his specificity could not be used to torment me. Instead, my father’s specter waits inside my fantasies of her, and barely has the shoulder slipped from off her dress then he arrives, summoned by her to mock my loss. Another rival, I could scrag and not lose sleep about it, but killing the loins from which one sprang is guaranteed to make one mad. Justine, you kept yourself and stole my father from me! That will not go unavenged. But how am I to make you suffer as I have? Something howls in the woods. Of course. What better substitute for patricide exists than Vesper, the one whose opposition turned my bidding for Justina’s love into a game of three-hand euchre? I’ll march against the eldest hand and turn him down for good this time. The dagger that Justina made will send her father to the grave! [Enter the Vesper, howling and loping across the stage.] And there he goes, running toward death! Exeunt. Scene vi Merritt’s Parlor. Enter Merritt and Justina, dusting snow from her cloak. JUSTINA: This close to spring, I look for thaw not frost, and least of all a squall that paints the night sky’s darkness white. By midnight, I suspect the drifts will have remade the world, a blank, unshadowed scape where I would lose my way back to my home and hearth. Why make me beg to borrow yours? MERRITT: It can’t be half so bad as that. A passing flurry. You can warm your hands before my fireplace and then we’ll see about tonight. JUSTINA: You’re acting strangely, Merritt. Why? This prophet who, with anxious voice, denies the storm and aims to throw his lover out in freezing temps is not the prophet who proclaimed that he could shelter sinners from apocalyptic punishment. MERRITT: You want a prophet’s reasoning? Suppose I said a vision came, revealed that, if you stayed the night, you’d die, and since I didn’t turn you out, my hands would bear your blood. JUSTINA: Then I would say you’re valiant and that I’m proud the one I love would sacrifice my body’s warmth to spare my life. MERRITT: Of course you would. Well, it would be a lie. The truth is that one tires of lying beside a woman, even one as fair as you. In fact, your fairness plants a doubt in me: What are the odds Justina is more beautiful, or rather the most beautiful, when I have hardly seen the world? You have beguiled my senses, dear, but they are senses ignorant. A clever man can trick a fool only so many times before the fool will hate the clever man. The ignorant despise the wise as I despise your beauty now. JUSTINA: You should have stuck with prophecy. You have no gift for crafting lies and that’s so obviously false I’d almost laugh, except I know my laughter will not save me from the blizzard to which I am condemned. If you reject me, you’re compelled to do so by some unseen hand. MERRITT: I do it of my own free will. JUSTINA: Then you’re no better than your son! For all your careful talk, you’ve proved your words are worthless, excrement thrown by the bucket to the sea where they will be forgotten. MERRITT: Good! You finally understand me, then. Consider all my recklessness as you are trudging through the snow. [Exeunt Justina.] She’s in the care of Vesper’s God. At least she’s spared the spirit’s rod. Exeunt. Scene vii Woodland. Heavy snowfall. Enter Thomas. THOMAS: The Vesper’s holy pawprints cross this snowbound path like chi and rho, and I can only hope the howls I’m following belong to him. It would be just my luck to clump into a wolfpack’s den alone. I ought to take this blizzard as a sign denouncing my whole plan, except I have no plan. What chance in hell is there that, finding Vesper, he’ll trot right to my open palm just as a dog to master would? He knows my look, if not my smell, and must know my intent. I left the planning to my father for a reason. This is case in point. Enter Acolyte. Thomas steps behind a tree. Enter the Vesper. The Vesper approaches the Acolyte and takes food from his hand. THOMAS: [aside] I’m not the only one who braves the cold tonight. I know those robes but not as well as Vesper does. And look how tame the beast becomes to see a friendly face. I’ve heard of vipers luring birds by tails they’ve made to look arachnid. Birds, expecting a free meal, instead receive the viper’s venomed fang. And all the viper does is wait. Exeunt the Vesper. The Acolyte crosses the stage. Thomas draws a knife, slays the Acolyte, and dons his robes. THOMAS: I’ve seen the way my quarry went, and mimicry will make his end. Thomas draws the robe’s hood. Exeunt Thomas. Enter Justina. The disrobed body of the dead acolyte lies in the distance. JUSTINA: The unwise proverbs of a man lead down a path no woman walks unless she overvalues body and undervalues soul. I’ve left mine blacker than a colly bird because I trusted Merritt’s word. There’s nothing love from love withholds except the promise of tomorrow. And yet, love is not love refusing the stain of sin as its own burden. Look at me, God. Have I not borne another’s sin since New Year’s Day and let it separate me from my father’s gaze? Did I not view his love as hate, his discipline as vanity—while I was proud to bask in Merritt’s flatteries— his rescuing of drowning men as the artillery that tore holes in their sails, splintered their ships? I do not care if I was wrong or right about my father’s judgment. He’d never send me to my death unless he first had grappled with that adversary to assuage my trembling fear. As psychopomp, he’d offer calloused hands and limp beside me. That heavy gate admits but one to pass, I won’t pretend he’d take me further, but he’d watch and pray that I would rest in peace, whatever lies beyond that gate. So, why have I abandoned him? Even without his proper mind, he’d treat me with the dignity a father shows a daughter, and a daughter’s not repulsed by age, infirmity, or loss of sense but looks to ease that suffering. I’ll go to him, confess my faults, and then, freed of my shame and guilt, live as his daughter once again. Justina walks into the distance where, discovering the murdered acolyte, she crosses herself, kneels beside him, and places her hand upon his head. JUSTINA: Oh, Connor. Naked as we came, you’ve left the world. May you be clothed in glory, stand beside the throne, and intercede with all the saints on my behalf. Whoever wounded and left you in disgrace, the town will bring to justice. If I can, I’ll put you on my shoulder. [Justina struggles with the acolyte’s body but leaves him on the ground.] Stiff and cold and heavy as a stone. May nature’s shroud preserve you, Connor. When I return from town, I’ll bring the sheriff and men to bury you. Exeunt Justina. Scene viii Outside Merritt’s House. Heavy snowfall persists. Enter Merritt from front door. MERRITT: Unseasonable snow, relent. I beg you, let my casting out preserve, not end, Justina’s life. Don’t prove by me how futile all attempts at thwarting fate must be. Do not erase her perfect form as you already have erased the footsteps that would lead her home. [Merritt walks away from his door.] I fear I will not sleep tonight, or any till this augury has been fulfilled. If I could speed this reckoning by spilling blood, I’d strike the victim down tonight and bring Justina back if I need track her down myself. Perhaps the Beggar’s estimate was right. I’m sure that I could make a case that he indeed was runner up in loyalty to her. My lies tonight have knocked her from that claim. But I don’t have it in me yet. This storm must further chill my blood. Enter Vesper. He lopes up to Merritt’s front door and sits beside it. MERRITT: Still following me then, old boy? No sooner do you beat some dogs away, then they return for more. What say you, Vesper? There are none so diligent as you have been attending to our temple’s doors. No injury was strong enough to keep you from my services. And here you are the very night I send your daughter off, a stray come scratching at my door for scraps. It’s clear now. Holy canine, you have come to fetch this stick and satisfy the prophecy— I have been doomed to kill my most devoted follower, the dread of which has plagued me without need. Merritt strikes the Vesper with the spirit’s crozier. The Vesper dies. MERRITT: And thus I snip the Parcae’s web. Enter Thomas still hooded in the acolyte’s robes. THOMAS: The Vesper’s dead! Merritt swings his crozier, slashing Thomas’s throat with the basilisk’s spines. Thomas falls to the ground where he struggles but is unable to speak. MERRITT: And you won’t live to tell about it, acolyte. This snow I thought a curse will drink your blood as my accomplice, cover my tracks, your drag-marks to the grave that I will make for you. A cave disguised by switches should suffice. [Thomas dies. Merritt rests his crozier beside the door.] My weights are easy, burdens light because they had ascetic diets! Merritt grabs Thomas under the arms and lifts him. The hood of Thomas’s robe falls and a lantern beside the door illuminates Thomas’s face. Merritt drops Thomas’s body, backs away. Thomas’s knife falls to the floor beside him. MERRITT: Impossible. A trick of light or snowfall warps this youthful face. That’s all. Uncanny the resemblance, but one at first should always doubt the testimony of his eyes. My son did not take Vesper’s robes, did not receive his baptism in wintry waters, and would not have left to take the Vesper’s orders. [raising his voice, looking around] Here lies some other boy, not mine! Tom’s safe—not here, and not alone; he waits for me to make things right! [quietly] Then why do you still hesitate? [Merritt approaches Thomas, drops to one knee, picks up Thomas’s knife, and removes the hood.] You fool. You foolish brute. This knife belongs to your own heart. Your blood should be the blood that slicks this blade. You cast him out. Let your own veins when you reduced your only heir to Vesper’s rags. Spirit, come now! This curse is more than I can bear. I did not bargain with Tom’s life when I assented to your word. Not for my sake alone but Tom’s did I look for this awful power. His followers were mine. Mine his. Where are you then, infernal ghost? I’d yet make one more deal with you. A trade. I’d make this scarlet snow more red if you’d let Thomas live. [Merritt holds the knife’s point to his chest, hesitates then throws aside the weapon.] I know you are not generous. And I’ll not waste another ounce of blood. What can I do, my son? There’s nothing else, so Vesper’s tomb must be your own, but I’ll erect a monument for you in time so that your memory will bear and buoy me across the dark. My rod will blossom in your ark. In silence, Merritt drags Thomas’s body and then Vesper’s body to a cave. Snow continues to fall. Merritt covers the entrance of the cave with fallen branches. Returning to his house, Merritt retrieves his crozier. Enter an acolyte. Merritt stumbles back. MERRITT: That wolfish face. It cannot be. You’re dead. I buried you. Get back! Don’t take another step. You’re dead! Exeunt Merritt through front door. Lights fade to black.



I cannot say that I have read enough plays to be a worthy critic, but I found this very impressive! I thoroughly enjoyed your wordplay and dialogue. I know it's intended to be tragic, but I did find it a bit disheartening that I disliked all of the characters for most of this act. Thank you for sharing this work! How long did it take you to write?
Best one yet! 👏